Fifth Grade Poems from 2003-2004 during my first full year teaching here in the states after a year of teaching in Mexico and a year of subbing. These students are now adults, and a few are my friends of Facebook. A few are seniors in college and about to graduate this May.
Antonio
Chocolate cake burns in ovens it gets hot as the sun.
Gets sprinkles on it but I rather prefer a chocolate bun.
Ivon
I have a house
Shaped like a mouse.
Mariana
I eat pizza every weekend.
I ate the pizza at the end.
Carlos
Me and my best friend are loyal.
Me and my best friend will always be royal.
Patricia
My dog likes to fight.
She sometimes has to bight.
Girls.
By Nico
Girls are nice and kind.
They are hard to find.
Enemies.
By Dario
I hate enemies
That steal my laundry.
Michael
Pizza is delicious to eat.
It shouldn’t be eaten with wheat.
Hollisha
I love to eat birthday cake,
But it takes to long to bake.
Brandon
Pigs are fat. Pigs are pink.
Pigs are animals that always stink.
Mice.
By Justin
I have some mice
That eat rice and play dice.
My Bunny.
By Tiffany
I have a bunny that’s really funny.
She loves it when it’s really sunny.
The Girl Cheetah.
By Jesus
There is a cheetah.
Her name is Rita.
MY MOTHER.
By Nelly
My mother is nice and kind.
My mom’s not blind, has a big mind
Elisset
Texas is very hot,
So my Aunt bought a pot.
I HATE SCHOOL.
By Aldo
I hate school and I hate saying school rules.
Don’t think school’s cool, sometimes I think school’s for fools.
Diana
Kittens are sweet and furry.
I like them and they like me.
Juanita
Cake is yummy and sweet
Cake is neat and tweet.
Alexa
My best friends are funny.
They say outside it’s sunny.
Erika
My best friend is kind and only nine
She has a big mind that really shines.
Quashauna
Lemon in sour candy is sweet,
Caramel candy is my favorite treat.
Vanessa
The house is a mess,
I must confess.
Miguel G.
Games are my blames.
Don’t touch the flames.
Jacob
Me and Danzell are going to play ping pong. He says, he is going to win but he is so, so wrong.
Enrique
It’s football I love.
I throw it high above.
Melina
I love cookies.
They give me strange looks-ies.
Moon.
By Cathy
The moon is white.
It shines so bright.
Edgar
My bunny is a dummy.
He is very funny.
Elisabeth
You got a head,
and your always ahead.
Matthew
I have to write
Two lines that rhyme.
Watermelon Dew.
By Gabriela
The sweet watermelon dew on my face,
I’ve got to get more of that taste!
CAKES
By Lizbeth
I like to eat a cake
Because I bake.
Happy Halloween.
By Ana
Give me some candy,
Or smell my feet.
Witty kids! Nice work
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Awesome. Dario’s is particularly so: “I hate enemies / That steal my laundry.” Worthy to be framed and put on a wall. And such a complex rhyme, too.
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Children are much better poets than adults. They are the most creative poets of the world because they can transcend a complexity that we often mangle up in lines, with just an utterance to make it clear. Bravo to your kids!
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Exactly why I love reading children’s poetry.
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